Friday, September 27, 2013

The adventure of the spaceship called iss enterpriseb.


The adventure of the spaceship called iss enterprise……….

Once upon a time in a galaxy far far away there was a man captain Kurk who was an explorer. He went to space with his crew on the space ship called iss enterprise.

When he got to space captain Kurk was spinning on his shamazing chair with his cool eyes closed.

1 minute later he heard a rumbling noise and then BANG he fell face first into the hardest floor you can ever imagine. Captain Kurk’s crew chief Checkof yelled “ captain our engines and power are down we cant breath without the power.

Later on Kurks crew were dying and he almost died because you cant breath in space without power. So Kurk went to the power and engines room and repaired the power and the engines but they still had to land the ship. Whew. They landed the ship!!!!!!!!!!!

He’s a hero because he landed the ship, saved the day and most of all he saved his crew.

By Henare

1 comment:

  1. Hello
    Henare you have done some great language. And I see some good adjectives

    from Bailey your class mate.

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